Monday, September 21, 2009

FINAL STATEMENT!










My first time around trying to fit music under the Urban coll um, seemed like a good idea, and it was, but for my first concepts around it wasn't amazing...So after talking with a couple of my other classmates, and conversing with them I decided to take my concept and switch it around in two days...It was difficult but the results came out way better and stronger.


For my approach with the dot composition, type composition, and image selection, I decided on how my dot compositions would look first, I wanted to make sure that every word i had chosen with each composition worked. I still stuck with music, but instead of having such a small selection of Genre's I ended up switching it up to having nine Genres, one for each of the descriptive words I had for each dot composition. Once I had all of my Genre's selected, which would be; Punk, Metal, Grunge, Hip-Hop, RnB, Classic, Reggae, Techno, and Pop music. I decided to match those to each one of my words I have listed below in one of my previous blogs, and From their on I recreated my dot compositions for the book project. I believe they support my concept, because every composition tells a story about that certain Genre of music.





I believe that my book shows to be concise and cohesive artifact, because all of my compositions,are based on one subject and although my subject touches base on different genres of music, it still stays cohesive by sticking with showing the emotions of the different genres of music. I believe also that every page in my booklet, has a very nice composition to it, and I also believe that of every dot composition, they all show a nice color palette, I really tried to stick with a certain set of colors on every page.

What I learned over the course of the project, was Precision! Precision! I definitely didn't realized how precise i had to be with making every dot composition, and every transparency. I don't even remember how many times I had to redo all of my transparencies and my dot compositions, because I knew they were either messy or not working. I am trying to teach myself how become neater about my craft and although this is not as perfect as I so much tried to get it to be, It is one of the best hand crafted I have ever done...hopefully in the next project It will be ten times better.





I would definitely say that what I can improve on, is brainstorming, and craftsmanship. In the beginning of the project I was so lost at first because I didn't know what I was going to do. My mind mapping was okay, but I didn't feel like I picked at my brain as much as I should have and could have. Even though my ideas finally came on the table, it was a little late when they came and had I gotten them right in the first couple of workdays maybe my work would have been done and presented on our first personal critiques better. As far as my craftsmanship goes, because I know where I have been in the beginning of my freshman year and now, I really think its improved a great deal, now I just have to keep that up so it can grow even more to a higher level.

I really enjoyed crafting and putting the project together, when I saw my compositions coming together I really thought about how nice this will look in the end and I was right...I can't wait for the next one....maybe a better outcome.





1 comment:

  1. Collaboration was important to your process so it is good that you took some time to describe it in your post.

    It is good that you are showing examples from your book here. Be sure the image quality is good - in focus & good lighting. Check the recent post on the vis com blog for tips on using levels to improve the contrast of photos.

    And learning to improve hand craft will directly play into good digital craft. Keep working on this important skill.

    Good observations about your early process. You have to continue working through a problem with many iterations.

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